Annotated Bib Peer Review

Samantha : I think Samantha did well on giving a detailed summary of her sources, as well as giving background on her source. I think she did very well incorporating the quotes and picking good quotes that are important to what she is writing about. She also used her citations in conversation very well. She also did very well putting her sources in conversation with the other.

She needs to revise her citation, as they were not in the correct format.

Ex of citation:

National Center for Chronic Diseases Prevention and Health Promotion. “Health and Academic Achievement” https://www.cdc.gov/healthyyouth/health_and_academics/pdf/health-academic-achievement.pdf

I read:

National Center for Chronic Diseases Prevention and Health Promotion, “Health and Academic Achievement”

and :

The Perception of College students about a Healthy Lifestyle and its Effect on their Health

Noah : Noah did well on giving a summary of his articles, but needs to connect his citations with the others and use them in conversation better in the last paragraph. He also needs to revise his citations as they were not properly formatted.

I read:

Medical School Attrition-Beyond the Statistics a Ten Year Retrospective Study

Marie Caulfield. Geoffrey Redden. Henry Sondheimer, “Graduation Rates and Attrition Factors for U.S.