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Rough Draft Workshop

  • Writer: jrs16y
    jrs16y
  • Apr 3, 2018
  • 1 min read

I read Samanthas paper. It was a personal essay. I think her description of how she felt when her parents got divorced was good and I really liked the metaphors she used because they were creative. I think she incorporated dialogue well, which I could use. I think she could use a longer conclusion and bring it all full circle.

 
 
 

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